Looking Forward

by JAMIE   Jun 6, 2006



Why do I miss you as much as I do?
What is it about you that makes me want you?
I just don't get it.

I guess it's because you treated me so well.
Never had someone that loved me like you did.
Nobody was there like you were
When I was down you always made me smile

There is just so much I miss about you

The way your arms wrapped around me
Made me feel so secure
The way your kiss swept me off my feet

I thought I was over you
But, as always, I was wrong, I still love you

I want to tell you how I still feel
I want to let you know
That I no longer cut
That I still love you

I would do anything to be in your arms again
To feel you sweet kiss just for one more time

I know I had my chance and I completely blew it
This is all my fault
But you you didn't help a whole lot either

But it's no use you wouldn't care
About a word I had to say
Nothing I could do would change your thoughts
Change the way you feel about me
Or the fact that you no longer feel me

What happened to us
Why can't we go back to just the two of us
We were so perfect together
So perfect for each other
Then one day you decided to leave me so alone

All I want is a second chance
I would do anything for that
Just one more time with you
That's all i want

I thought you were the one different from the rest
The one who would HELP me
Not the one who would HURT me

Everyone told me:
Just telll him about it
He is a really great guy
He will understand why
He will help you overcome this
You will get through this together

What happened to that guy
That would help me get through my problem
Why did you have to go when I needed you the most

I want you... I want US
But it's only me left in the dark with no hope

Please come back
I Love you
Why don't I matter to you anymore???

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I liked the last three stanza's alot! This poem was good. The flow wasn't too bad. But the emotions you expressed were very strong and bold. Great job once again. 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "Love me like you did."
    should be 'loved' since the sentence started in the past tense.
    ~~~
    "When you liked to me"
    lied? instead of liked?
    ~~~
    "But why do I want you back
    When you liked to me
    About wanting me back"
    I didn't like how both of those lines ended in 'back'
    ~~~
    "All i wasnt is a second chance"
    'want' instead of 'wasn't'
    ~~~
    I liked the poem, but I thought certain stanzas were repetitive and unnecessary, and probably just present because of the overflowing emotion present. Still a good poem though.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    A couple thoughts... break up the long thing of text into a few stanzas. It's easier on the eyes and not as daunting to a potential reader to see stanzas - kind of like paragraphs instead of just a full page of text. Also, keep checking your grammar. There are a couple places that need apostrophes. Otherwise, it's very good and heartfelt.

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