Comments : Changes in the world

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    A very impassioned write. You speak volumes in this poem about the day to day troubles we all must face.
    I have to drive to work for an hour so thispoem really hit home to me with references to gas and oil.
    The most powerful line I found was:
    Gas prices still soar, it eats me to the core.
    I can relate to the feelings expressed in this glorious poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Ohh geez, tell me about it. Those gosh darn gas prices are a pain! This is very true, all of it. It's good to see people who know the mistakes of the world. I wish other people can see it too, maybe then more people would try to change it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Truthful words - made for a great write! Everyone across the globe should be able to relate to this one. Enjoyable read.