Everlasting Dream

by Allen   Jun 6, 2006


My life has changed,
no more does it haze,
ever since my heart was engaged,
oh, what a perfect phase

It all began with,
those three conquering words,
and will end still with,
those three perfect words

I fell into an everlasting dream,
oh what a place it was, a place
where all my dreams came true,
all because I was with you

A garden was created
two people were placed, lovers in truth,
there was a beautiful lady,
she was my forbidden fruit

In the wintering night,
forevermore we would embrace,
heaven, was when i was holding you tight,
lost in your beautiful face

In front of a fire-place,
here we would kiss,
and continue to embrace,
this was our bliss

My feelings were clear,
'I love you',
something trickles down your face, a tear
'I love you too'

We would kiss once again,
a secret prayer, I had spoken
it was to never feel the pain,
of us being broken

© Allen Limjoco 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by Macy

    Very cute and sweet! i loved it a lot! it brounght a smile to me =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awwww.. that is so adorable and sweet! i loved it.. it contained so much emotion, great language and descriptions, and the rhymes were a little forced but still worked well.. nice write! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Aww. this is adorable. i wish i had love like yours. this is a great poem, cute and it brought a smile to my face. great writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by -Ghostship Fidelity-

    ^_^ That was a work of pure brilliane. I've never read a better poem that contains a rhyming scheme. It had great concept, good focus, wonderful flow, and you definitely kept to the shceme, which many writers tend to fall out of near the end. You kept it strong through all of it. Plus I just loved the descriptions and imagery of it. It implants a nice picture of love in my head. All of it rings true.

    -Tony

  • 18 years ago

    by Charissa

    Loved it i could actually feel the love that the poem was expression 5/5

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