WOW!!! this is really deep...i know it was really sad but i truely like it...GREAT POEM

Great poem!!!! i loved every bit! keep up the awesome work!

Excellent poem really...shit...it's just like you're writeing about me & my family...theres so mouch fellings..i really like it...keep writeing please..5/5

I loved this, it was so much deeper than the first part of the poem and this made the poem feel more real. keep writing
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