by Precoius_Dreams_ox Jun 6, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
As a tear rolled down her cheek and landed on her lips.. |
by babyPB
Aw. this is so cute :D |
Aww! i love it, so sweet. great work |
I rel8 2 this 1 a lot.... it almost made me cry... |
Wow, i really liked that. not every person has experienced that love, and yet you write it like it happens everyday. awesome work. 5/5 |
by MAD
Very good. I usually prefer metaphorical deep stuff, but i must say this poem here is quite well written and sounds very good. A touching scene it describes too, i like that. |