The night i died

by skaterboy666   Jun 6, 2006


The day I came home my mom said nothing. My dad is gone. My heart belongs to no one my life left me when she did. The fact that she left tears me apart.

That evening she called but it was to late when my mom came in I was surrounded by a puddle of blood. The note on my bed read "To all who care sorry and to her thank you for this"

At the funeral the people came to show their love but also grieve. The most important thing is she showed up, and even though it was to late she told me she loved me and she made a mistake she kissed my head. She went home and she did the same thing. that was the night i died

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    The story used in this piece is very effective ^^
    Nice work

  • 17 years ago

    by SexyGirl101akaJess

    I Love The Poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Erin

    Thats soo sweet omg i love this poem its soo sad:(:(
    good job

  • 17 years ago

    by ~Pixi Dust~

    It a good poem and i like it my friend actualy did this her x in brizil killed herself and he found out and did the same

  • 17 years ago

    by AshleexAstonished

    Awe