What went wrong?

by Penni   Jun 6, 2006


We used to be so close
You and I
We told each other everything
All secrets and no lies

There was once a time
I\'ddo anything for you
Now it\'ssike there\'s s point

You ask for my opinion
Yet what I give you
Is not what you want to hear
So tell me what to do
Cos all I\'m doing is telling the truth

You\'ve caused me so much hurt
I cry in the middle of the night
I cry myself to sleep
I dread the next morning
Cos thats when I\'m gonna see you

I never thought I\'d feel this way
Not about you anyway
You were like my sister
Since we were closer
Than I am to my real sister

I dont know what to do anymore
I\'ve lost you and you\'ve lost me

But even though we\'re growing apart more every day
I want you to know
That you mean a lot to me
~*~I Love you~*~

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. this was sweet.. it had a lot of emotion, and the flow was pretty good. the only thing i couldn't figure out was why in this stanza the words are all messed up with extra letters and such :

    There was once a time
    I'ddo anything for you
    Now it'ssike there's s point

    ^^ besides that, nice job! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Penni

    Hi people, I wrote this song to my best friend of 3 years!! I feel like I'm losing her.. hope u's like it. please vote and comment.. Love ya's!!

    PS if u's have MSN add me, rawko88@hotmail.com