Comments : What went wrong?

  • 18 years ago

    by Penni

    Hi people, I wrote this song to my best friend of 3 years!! I feel like I'm losing her.. hope u's like it. please vote and comment.. Love ya's!!

    PS if u's have MSN add me, rawko88@hotmail.com

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. this was sweet.. it had a lot of emotion, and the flow was pretty good. the only thing i couldn't figure out was why in this stanza the words are all messed up with extra letters and such :

    There was once a time
    I'ddo anything for you
    Now it'ssike there's s point

    ^^ besides that, nice job! :)