Mel,

I loved this poem, and I know that comments mean alot. They do to me. I really loved this poem and can understand it. Read mine sometime =)-- Meg

Awesome poem, great job!

xoxoxo
Haley

Wow, i really like this poem. dont you sometimes feel that the way you are or the pain you feel at that moment is always caused by someone else. just put the blame on them, but truely, you cant cause u let them contine 2 hurt u. but there are exceptions. anyways, i like your poem a lot, one i feel needed to be commented on. i hope this is what you meant by comments.

Hey another really good 1! is this about a friend of a sister? either way its really good! if u eva need to tkl u no were i am babe love evie

Hey, I really liked this poem. I don't know what it was but one part really caught my eye:

"but she seems proud of them
where as i would never tell"

I really that that was kind of neat. I know exactly how it feels. Sometimes it feels like it's the only thing you can have complete control of. At least for me, somehow it makes me feels safe.

But anyways, good job. I thought it was excelent. Keep writting!

I have the same pain..stay strong best of luck..lovely poem..you really expressed your feeling well..xoxox love georgia