Indulge in me

by Jessica   Jun 6, 2006


I was mesmerized
By that charming smile
I was fascinated
With your floppy hair
I was captivated
With those soft hazel eyes

I wanted you to touch me
To cradle me
To cuddle me
To indulge in me..

You kissed me all over
I felt your lips on my tender skin
And I saw glitter of love in your eyes
And the way your hair fell over them

I wrapped my legs around you
And pulled you close to me
I felt your hot breath on my face
And heard your heart beat with excitement

We moved as one
Like a key in a lock
Fitting together perfectly
And needing one another to survive

We completed each other
You were the missing part
And until that key went into the lock
The door of my soul did not open..

But those are just memories,
Of the days of our hot passion and love
And they will never be repeated..
I only have one thing to ask of you
And that is,
To indulge in me once more..
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kinda different.. :) hope you like it!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Wow, i love it! Actually...i lvoe everything of yours that I've read so far, you're such an amasing writter, i love the way you create images and such. Anyways, i really loved it.

    --Steph

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Great write! My favorite stanza was:

    We completed each other
    You were the missing part
    And until that key went into the lock
    The door of my soul did not open..

    That was a powerful stanza in this wonderful poem. The emotions are deep and the passion is clearly visible.

    The only thing I found was in this stanza:

    You kissed me all over
    I felt your lips on my tender skin
    And I saw glitter of love in your eyes

    There were only 3 lines when allthe rest had 4 it kinda interupted the flow for me soI think if you add another line there it would read easier...just a thought. It was a fantastic and enjoyable read!! Great Job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Very nice, I really like this!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was different, But still very good! It all sounded so cute, Like the perfect couple. I really enjoyed reading it. Annnnd, I also liked how you used the key and door and lock thing. If that makes sense? Anywho, Another great poem. Keep em coming =P 5/5

    .x.TaLeEe.x.

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