This was different, But still very good! It all sounded so cute, Like the perfect couple. I really enjoyed reading it. Annnnd, I also liked how you used the key and door and lock thing. If that makes sense? Anywho, Another great poem. Keep em coming =P 5/5

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Very nice, I really like this!

Great write! My favorite stanza was:

We completed each other
You were the missing part
And until that key went into the lock
The door of my soul did not open..

That was a powerful stanza in this wonderful poem. The emotions are deep and the passion is clearly visible.

The only thing I found was in this stanza:

You kissed me all over
I felt your lips on my tender skin
And I saw glitter of love in your eyes

There were only 3 lines when allthe rest had 4 it kinda interupted the flow for me soI think if you add another line there it would read easier...just a thought. It was a fantastic and enjoyable read!! Great Job!!

Wow, i love it! Actually...i lvoe everything of yours that I've read so far, you're such an amasing writter, i love the way you create images and such. Anyways, i really loved it.

--Steph