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by Shes_gonna_commit_suicide_sooner_or_later   Jun 6, 2006


I know it's short. But it's also powerful. It has lotss of meaning. So, plese comment and rate and tell me what you think.

Just remember to listen closely in the rain, Then maybe you can here me screaming out in pain. Maybe you can hear the voice of reason. Maybe you can feel the fault of treason. Maybe I'll run by you and leave you a lock of my hair, reminding you that I had once been there. Listen closely to my words, and breathe the breath of despair.

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Very well penned. Great meaning behind it. You could maybe try naming it listen closer or something like that, iono. Anyways..5/5 :)
    -Jenna xo