Forever She Dances In Your Head

by Poppy   Jun 6, 2006


Red floods your vision,
She sings alone,
And she dances,
Forever dances in your head.

You need her red lips on yours,
You're needing to hear her laugh,
You need to see her,
And every time...

Every time you open your eyes,
You see her eyes looking back at you,
Every time you cry,
You hear her laugh echo around you.

And she dances forever,
Forever she dances in your head,
And she sings forever,
Forever she sings in your ear.

You can't get her voice out of your mind,
Or the way she smiles when you say her name,
You can't stop hearing her sing,
And forever she dances in your head.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Phoebe

    Different and great with it! =] x

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Hey! I was just searchin' around lookin' for the lower voted poems to see who needed some poetry help and who was just being picked on by people who give really low ratings for no reason. (I've had a few people do that to me,and I have to say, it's just annoying...but as long as you remember the voting points really aren't that important and say nothing about your poem) In your case, I have to say it must have been some silly votes put in because you deserve more than just a 2.5 for this. It's unique and written in a way that I haven't yet seen. - And you should get extra points for creativity such as that. So I'd just like to say, well done :). I'll do what I can to improve the over all rating on this by giving you a 5/5. Nice job :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Shelby G.

    I can definatly say it was very interesting. the concept was original and it had a good flow to it. but i'm more of a fan of ryhming :P doesn't mean you dont' deserve a high rating!!

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