I can definatly say it was very interesting. the concept was original and it had a good flow to it. but i'm more of a fan of ryhming :P doesn't mean you dont' deserve a high rating!!

Hey! I was just searchin' around lookin' for the lower voted poems to see who needed some poetry help and who was just being picked on by people who give really low ratings for no reason. (I've had a few people do that to me,and I have to say, it's just annoying...but as long as you remember the voting points really aren't that important and say nothing about your poem) In your case, I have to say it must have been some silly votes put in because you deserve more than just a 2.5 for this. It's unique and written in a way that I haven't yet seen. - And you should get extra points for creativity such as that. So I'd just like to say, well done :). I'll do what I can to improve the over all rating on this by giving you a 5/5. Nice job :)

Different and great with it! =] x