by Darien
Hey this was a really good poem. Ohh man, giggling girls! I use to hang out with a lot of them. I'm guessing this is a dance, or Prom night or something? Sounds very special, for a girl at least :P hehe good job though. |
by Natalie
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! That is so sweet. My older sister is getting married soon, And I can't wait lol. This poem was so good. And very sweet. I love weddings, there pretty tehe. |
Aww, i loved this poem. it was so cute! I think it was very good. Way to go! *two thumbs up* read mine sometime I oculd use the comments |
Very good! my aunt just got married a few days ago, and I wish I could have read this poem sooner! |
Aw, wow that was so adorable, you portrayed that day so well:) i really enjoyed reading it and I plan to read more of your work. |
by ---AL---
Love the similee in this poem, especially |
by blarg
This is a great piece of work. Keep working on your rythm and you'll be even better! |
by *Daniel94*
Yeah, great poem, keep up the good work.......dan....... |
by *Daniel94*
That was great, ps. are you on the internet write now |
by Stephanie
Aww! This poem is so sweet! Great Job!! Keep up the good work! 5/5 Your a wonderful writer! |
Aw suck a beautiful poem. i loved it well done and so descriptive =D |
by Sophie
I loved this poem and i am getting married in a week... what u describe is exactely what im longing for! Thnx so much for the smile you brought to my face! Well done! |
by ღ*KiM*ღ
As soon as I begun reading this I knew it was a wedding by the way you had described events that had gone on. |
by Nelle
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, that is sooo sweet!!! it made me smile, the whole time...Great job 5/5 |
by Krissey
Awww this just makes you excited to get married and makes you want to grow up..although I'd like to stay young for a while! Beautifully written, wonderfully pieced together!! |
Very good, I loved it, 5/5 keep up the good work! |