Comments : Dreams of Mercury

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    The best understanding
    comes from having pride
    in the personal mirrors
    that we all hold inside.
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    Really liked that part. It stood out the most to me. The poem itself was good. The rhyming and flow seemed good too. A great write.

    .x.TaLeEe.x.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan

    ^^^Agreed!

    I love the message, the flow, the title...everything!

  • 18 years ago

    by Aken Sol

    ...
    I'd like an explanation please.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Mirrors, hmm. It's funny how we look into our everyday mirror, for imperfections. Another fascinating thing about mirrors, is that most of them are just plastic. The real mirrors are made from real glass, and only the wealthy would have, or the nobles in earlier days. Very nice poem, a lot of truth in this.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Ah, that was brilliant! I loved it! One of the best so far, perhaps because it has such a deepened and true meaning.

    "the best understanding
    comes from having pride
    in the personal mirrors
    that we all hold inside."

    ^That was such an intense and powerful stanza. Keep up your excellent work!

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    I agree with everybody else, your last 4 lines are very deep, Great job