Weak mind

by lilgurl_@VAallday   Jun 6, 2006


So many things come to mind
when so many people find
a sad situation in there mind

that makes them weak
and makes them think
about the times they weep

as many times they weep
is like death appointments gets deep

so deep that they go crazy
and lose the things they love

and they think if the things
they love still loves you
but why think about that when you
weak

you should think about the time
yall spent
and the love yall shared
the material things and things given from the heart
from every person such as a daughter

which the daughter has been there
even when the mother was never
others have feeling
including family so why
guess such love
when,
sickor
weak

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  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    It was very good with a powerful message, but i felt like it was missing something. Keep up the good work. 4/5 :)
    -Jenna xo

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