Good to know you're still writing well, and have probably improved in my absence...this is great. Great rhyming, rhythm, and imagery...especially the imagery. keep it up

Godbless lola...we all miss her.

Great job. Nothings jumpy about this, it's mooth and seems planned out. Grat job

Thanks for commenting on my poem, if you really want to understand my poems a little more, check out the saddness an depressoin forum, the moving thread. Note my sister's faince has a little kid who was visiting when I wrote the poem you most recently commented on.

Great job. Keep writing. 5/5.
-Vino

P.S. You got second in my contest