OMG!! Jessie... This is an awsome poem! I love it! You really let ur feelings out on this one! I just want to say thanx for kinda teachin me how to write poems cause they really help me let out my feelings! I love u so much! bye!

Aw sad but beautiful my dear

xoxoxo Haley

Dude thats amazing!! and you know you can always talk to me no matter what!! i love you sooo much!! you do not even know!!! SERIOUSLY!! without you id be nothing..at all...you bring so much life to me, when i met you i found a new light in myself that i didn't know lived, and you still have so much to share and teach me! anyone that misses out on you will never EVER be whole! xoxox MUAH!

Wow! such a sad poem... and sadly one that i can relate to... i hope you keep writing because your poem is beautiful and you have an amazing talent... 5/5

WOW!!!! that's all I can say right now I'm speechless your a wondeful poet so stick to it your good at letting your feelings show this way WOW!!!! 5/5 TOTALLY your GREAT

I absolutley love this poem hunnie, it's amazing!
Omg, I don't even know how to tell you how much I can relate to this! Oh wow, its so scary on how well you totally just described my life in your own poem!
Rock on! ... & Keep up the good work!
Always and Forever
Beautiful Cutter

Thanx for commenting my poem my guy. wow you really let your feeling show but i think its kinds sad that atleast your dad hasnt left you yet maybe you should just talk to him cuz atleast he loves you enough to still be there i dont know were my dad is and hes never eeven tried to be one id switch u spots any day because id rather have one then not have one at all you should really think about it and talk to him because he HAS o love u if he stayed cuz mine left. how much does that say

This is so beautiful! I know how this is and oh my gosh I love this poem!

Once again an awesome poem and i can relate to this one : ( i dont really know u but meh. u have a huge talent anyway chow

Wow , that was amazing ., and i almost cryed when i read it , because i could relate to it soo much..
your an amazing writer,keep it up.

take care

-sam