by ♥Diana Cardero ©♥ Jun 6, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
I wan't to make love throughout the whole night |
by Tara Kay
I loved that poem, and it was beautiful. But it was very passionate and very deep, and i am surprised that at 13 you are writing a poem with this content, however it was lovely and i thought you did well. |
by Hanley
Hey loved the poem ur sooo good at writing pomes and thant 4 all the comments |
by dora
Hey darl beautifully written p0em a very t0uchng piece great j0b darl thank u f0r ur c0mment 0n my w0rk. meant al0t xx |
by Hanley
Hey ur poem was good i like it lots |