by Aussie
COol poem...things don't seem the way they are. that's a gr8 way to say. so easy to just put a smile:) |
Amazing poem hun, as always. hope you're ok... take care, |
Wow.....awesome poem!! |
by Laura
This poem felt like you were writing my thoughts on paper. Thos was a great write and I could really relate to the feelings of that poor girl. |
I love it it is easy to relate to and the ay you wrote it i cold picture the girl you were talking about |
by Colby
Great poem, that can reach out to so many people. 5/5 |
by Simon Hayes
Deep and heart wrenching write... Everyone has said it all. I think many can relate, or at least feel so drawn back by this poem. Impressive stuff! |
by Natalie84
Well, we've all read a million poems like this...the "mask" kind of poems. I think yours stand out a bit...a little different than the norm...I love it! Nicely done!! Sad that it's true life for so many youngsters! :) |
by Sourav
Wonderful poem! It's so well written! |
I like this one like i like your other ones |
by X~Angie~X
Amazing poem i love it.. it has great flow and rhythm.. its soo good i love it.. great job 5/5 keep on writing.. keep ur head held high |
by May
You are such a wonderful writer! I love your word choices!! Please keep writing!!!! -May |
by Danii
Wow.. thats all i can say man your poem is |
by Shaw
Touching |
by Sara
Again Nicole i am very impressed!!!5/5 |
by Nate
Tinydancer; |
by Chantelle
Another amazing poem, very sad and true. Love it and luv ya! :P xx |
by JAY Poet
Great poem i loved it you know your my favorite poet!!! |
by Tammie
This poem is so true. I know how this feels, unfortunately me, as well as a lot of other people have to put this "mask" on everyday. Great poem. Keep up the good work. |
by intensions
Damn i love your work... |