Well it shows a similar theme that always reveals this sad heart-wrenching story etc. But in a way this one seemed strangely different if not completely different. Perhaps not the best but rather well done.
~Faith

Very good poem You are a very talented writer keep up the good work 5/5

I think I know that girl. I think everyone knows that girl. We see her all the time in one form or another. Incredible job!

OMG that was amazing i love it..

[[thanks for the comment on mine.. ]]

keep it up girl n keep writieng!
much love
always alana

Hahaha u funny girl. its ok. i mainly didnt want ppl to leave comments in case they tried to sway my opinion on breakups or anything like that. i just wanted this guy to see it and it seems tat was the only way. ur welcome to comment anytime hehe. but wow, u like my poems? i OBSESS over urs! ur on my favourites list and i check ur poems all the time to see any new ones. ur awesome. never give up. ur my inspiration. and again, thanks xxx
luv dani

You are an amazing writer! 5/5

Excellent write, very true I can relate to this poem and I believe you are one of the most talented on this site.5/5

This is so good..=) This is exactly how I feel sometimes. You described it perfectly. Awesome Job and keep up the good work! 5/5

TAKE CARE-
stargazer38

U rock Nic, dun ever let anybody say otherwise, this is gud gal, u got the talent, truly a great poet, love ur poems gal, dun ever stop writing, luv it so damn much, this is so damn gud!!!=)

Fantastic , goodjob girl !!!!!!!

Very Deep, well written by the way thanks for commenting on my poem.

Well done.

Depressing poetry is so much easier to master, isn't it?

Love it! I know someone just like this. Trys to make everything seem fine but its really not. Your a really good writer! 5/5! ~Megan~

This is a great poem! keep up the good work!

I totally relate to this. youre writing really inspires me. this is an excellent poem. =D

This is so well written. i can definitely relate to this one..
your one of my favorites. : )

Hey, your a really good writer! i can relate to these poems that is why i like reading them. even tho i dont know u im always here for u to talk.

email me if u need anything hun.
alisonnn--@hotmail.com

love ally.

I liked it. i liked how you rymed your stuff :)

Just so sad, you have a way of getting feelings across, u know that? a GREAT poem, keep it going!

You're one of my favourites of all time.

Idk what to say...5/5