Immortal Lover

by Poetess Lana   Jun 6, 2006


Whisper in my ear,
Tell me what I want to hear.
Scream at me "Bad Girl"
While I carve the same
two words into myself.

Tell me I wronged
myself, I brought shame
upon you, and you
don't give a damn about
me or my life.

Give me one, just one,
Good God-Damn reason
why I should stay here
on this Hell-On-Earth,

You love me,
You hate me,
This bipolar relationship
which I am half of gives me
reason to die...

To give myself this pain...

To leave you to slap
some other poor,
upset girl
around...

Comfort her once,
She falls into your
trap...

Your web of lies,
Then you begin the
torment...

which she takes as a
token of love...

Whisper in my ear,
Try to bring me to life,
These lies will end...

And I will be your
Immortal Lover...

Until the end of time.
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I was sitting in my closet being depressed and listening to the best band (Evanescence) when I wrote this...
So if you recognize some of their song titles in my poem there is your explanation!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Excellently written. Evanescense is one of my favorites. :] Keep it up.

    Thanks, your in my favorites for sure too.

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Excellent work
    5/5
    nicely writen
    yeah cud make out u had the evanescence inspiration :-)

    cud u vote & comment my poem murder or suicide
    i'll return the favour !

    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5.. W0W.. I am so amazed at how you write!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This is an amazing poem...I love the title (that's why I read it). I really liked the first stanza, it's very original, and your message is clear.

    Good job! 5/5

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    I love Evanescence. And yes, I recognized some titles. Nice job, you can try adding more imagery

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