Wow! i would have killed the *******. That's sad. Hope whoever it happened to is alright
i wrote some poems today, but i can't write about love or anything like that
My favourite is breaking down.
**jess**

This is so sad. im sorry if tht happened 2 u, but its very gd written.
Keept writing
take care
xoxox

Wow thats really sad ='[
but very moving and powerful poem
you are an amazing writer

Aww that mustve suk so much was it u it happened too.. sont worry something similiar happened to me aswell its bad cos it wil always stay with us and the memories wont go im sorry that that had happened.. when im angry or feeling emoitional i write them on paper aswell lit makes me feel better good job :) luv fiona

Hey that is really good it has alot of meaning i can relate 2 u coz its happened 2 me but it was my uncle dats awesome

OMG!! that is soo sad!! wow and to think that really happens.. how horrible!!

Omg that is a great poem.........who is it based on??

I don't understand how somebody can be so sick and hurt one another like that....i guess.... the world may never really know...

Wow!!! I really like this poem. its soo sad.

That was some deep shit my nigga!!! did u tell anybody????

That was some deep shit my nigga!!! did u tell anybody????

Wow that is really sad.i love how you worded it. did this really happen to you?

It was good but in ways very sad

Wow ima so srry if that happened to you. and i no sum 1 who went through that and i went through that alll so but not wit my bro. it is very good you can let it all out in words and i hope have a grate life. l8r *ashley*

Wow that is so terrible....but your an amazing writer, really amazing. If you ever need to talk, my s/n is ILuvHim73 and my msn email is Brit73gymnast@hotmail.com, you can always talk to me

OMG how sad!im so sorry that u had to go through that. I heard a similar story before except this hapend with that gurls stepbrother. Well anyways great poem and again im sorry. Keep up the good work
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This was beautifully written.

Omg! great poem but its super sad....

Wow thats so fuqed up that it was your brother!!!

but it was rly good i liked it

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Wow, thats "deep" but I can honestly say I know just what it's like...BTW I give this poem a 5/5 good job, don't ever stop writting, you're very good at it