Comments : Looking for that feeling

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl a deep and p0werful piece xx
    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    2nd line "every" day. (you wrote 'ever')
    3rd stanza, 1st line "you're" or "you are"

    Wow, such strong emotion. I really enjoyed this one. My favourite line was

    "And my tears weren't mistaken for the rain"

    Awesome stuff :)

  • 18 years ago

    by ButterflyKisses_xo

    Very good.
    Well written
    && Very emotional.

    Overall-5/5

    Stay strong hunny!!
    PM if u ever need to talk!

  • 18 years ago

    by PatheticLittleGirlxx

    Beautiful babes 5/5 i hearts it....
    keep it up