Comments : Father, Oh father

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew Guitor

    Wow. Great poem. Sadly the best poems always seem to be on sad topics. Sadness seems to be the most expressable Emotion. Thats probably why. Amazing.

    Matt

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "That uou my dad could have left me."
    should be 'you' not 'uou'
    ~~~
    "Father, Father its not the same without you."
    "I know its apart of life that everyone dies,"
    it's needs an apostrophe
    ~~~
    "Look daddy, I look up and I think I saw your face starring down at me in the moon."
    should be 'staring' not 'starring'
    ~~~
    I liked the ending line a lot, the rhyme really made the end very conclusive feeling, and I thought the rhyming was unobtrusive in general.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayd

    My favorite so far! Outstanding!