by Russian Bridge Jun 6, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Life, i woke and i slept. |
by Natalie
It was a little short, But it was good. I liked the meaning behind it. It was good. Keep it up! 5/5 |
by Darien
This was a good poem. 4/5, but you try hard. So I give you 5 |
by PygmyPuff
Fantastalicious! lol, its awesome, really. Such great vocabularity and skill. {5/5}...My only critique is you should spell out 5, it pops from the page and causes a distraction from the fine writing. |
I really love the message of your poem, it's so beautiful, and I can totally relate to it. |