Darkness of life!

by Russian Bridge   Jun 6, 2006


Life, i woke and i slept.
I loved and then cried.
I sat alone waiting for some one to love me like i love.
I have sat hear for five years now and I'm sat alone.
Because some one became so close to sitting.
But they saw where i was sitting and then ran.
They saw the state of my life and ran.
Due to fact that my life is one endless dark evil place.
with no light and one places to sit.
This place there room for two.
But the empty space once worried me is now filled with hate and depression.
I have fallen and i don't know which way.
All you need in life is love, but that the hardest thing to find.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    It was a little short, But it was good. I liked the meaning behind it. It was good. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    This was a good poem. 4/5, but you try hard. So I give you 5

  • 18 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Fantastalicious! lol, its awesome, really. Such great vocabularity and skill. {5/5}...My only critique is you should spell out 5, it pops from the page and causes a distraction from the fine writing.

    [PygmyPuff]

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I really love the message of your poem, it's so beautiful, and I can totally relate to it.

    Great job! 5/5

    Keep writing.