by Dana Jun 6, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
***Based on Renoir's painting The Luncheon of the Boating Party' http://www.renoir.org.yu/paintings/luncheon_of_the_boating_party.jpg *** |
by Chelsey
Wonderful. Nice flow and rhyme, another beautifully written poem. Keep up the awesome work. |
by Esther
I like this poem, it speaks the truth, but i don't know who the person is? anyway another woderfully creative poem. |
by Truest Lies
Sorry, I don't know what Rubai form is. The beginning was complicated to grasp, because usually I am used to simple words that just say what they mean, but this is also good exercise to the mind. |