If u kill urself like, EVER, i will so totally kill u. lmao. but i know what u mean...god i rlly do...but i love this and i my fave stanza was when u were talking about the power of will. Keep it up! WRITE, WRITE, and now im getting annoying so ima stop and go to ur other NEW poem. :).

Grrt job on coming back w/ a bang....i get where ur going with this, and i kno how much things suck sometimes...so how are u feeling now that u've done these? accomplished? unsatisfied? wut? ok, well i like this alot and i kno wut it is that u mean...dont kill ur sellf or m and raychel are coming after u!!! nice job,
love ya lots,
sore