Very Beautiful! A great message well put! Keep on writing!

Wow thats such an amazing poem and it's really really good that you care about that stuff because many people don't =)

it's really imagintive... paints a pretty picture but such an awful picture in reality to whats happening.
checkk out my poems too..i know you already commented on one and thanks because it ment a lot.
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Victoria*

Nice poem, Noni! You know, you are fairly good at other genres of poetry like this one. I am thoroughly impressed! 5/5

*DONT LITTER* very good!! I enjoyed that one too! your rhyming scheme and stanzas were good..keep it up! :-)

KurMiT

Though the ocean tends to frighten me at times, when writing I imagine the ocean being a source of peace and you descriptions brought that to life. Though you had a message at the end of the poem, which usually I don't recommend people donw right telling it, you seemed to pull it off.

The oceans sure do have a special thing, a message that indeed the world should follow
it's a great poem , really really good
keep it up