What it is About You that Makes My heart Tick

by My Obsεssion   Feb 20, 2004


There is something about you that I can’t ignore,
some certain aura that makes my heart roar.
Explaining what it is is no easy trick,
so instead I’ll try to describe what it is about you that makes my heart tick.

Your eyes sparkle with a radiance directly from within,
like you were made to fit god’s every whim.
You seem like you’re perfect in every single way,
though why this is so I can’t for the life of me say.

Everything about you makes my heart fly,
from your cute baby face to every tear that you cry.
I love your sweet smile, it’s so debonair,
and I adore your face, it’s complexion so fair.

Your lips are so full and so soft,
that they send my heart flying aloft.
They look as though they’ve never been kissed,
and your teeth, though crooked, are hard to resist.

Your eyes a warm hazel to match with your hair,
you’re put together so well it just isn’t fair.
Your eyelashes are so outrageously long,
though even for a guy’s, they do not look wrong.

Your plump little nose is the cherry on top,
the last detail of your face that makes my heart stop.
Your face is an exhibition I soon won’t be forgettin’,
for it’s been a huge factor in why my heart’s smitten.

There’s also your body so lean and so strong,
it’s a wonder you don’t seem to attract a huge throng.
Your muscles bulge with the slightest touch,
they are part of the reason why I want you so much.

Though almost impossible you’re even more beautiful on the inside,
but to figure this out I’ve tried and I’ve tried.
You’re loving, caring, compassionate and sweet,
there is no girl in the world that wouldn’t find you a treat.

You’re barely sad, mad, or angry at all,
your patience is as high as Mt. Everest is tall.
Your smile is that of an angel from above,
your skin being as warm and soft as a dove.

You may wonder why I love you so much,
why I adore everything from your smell to your touch.
You’re tenderness has left an impact on me I’ll never forget,
and to tell you the truth, it’s something I really don’t get.

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  • 20 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    Actually that's how it's supposed to go but thanks anyways :D

  • 20 years ago

    by Tourniquet

    You made a spelling error in line 3,Explaining what it "is" is no easy trick,
    Either than that this poems is truly beautiful. I love it, keep writing.
    Tourniquet