Comments : What it is About You that Makes My heart Tick

  • 20 years ago

    by Tourniquet

    You made a spelling error in line 3,Explaining what it "is" is no easy trick,
    Either than that this poems is truly beautiful. I love it, keep writing.
    Tourniquet

  • 20 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    Actually that's how it's supposed to go but thanks anyways :D