He's to sad to be saved

by Freakfall   Jun 7, 2006


He's all broken
from within
his world
begins to spin.

Rocked by deaths
in the family
nobody can
understand him.

He's to sad
to be saved
a pointless life
he's enslaved.

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  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Hey i sent you an email hun
    read it and reply
    kaykayz

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Hun you can be saved
    i miss talkin to you
    gah neither of us have been writing mush lately
    i miss your beautiful poetry...
    but i miss you the most
    how have you been

  • 18 years ago

    by Serenical Darkness

    Its good if u need some inpiration check out "a place to put everything" or some of my others keep it up dude its good

  • 18 years ago

    by Colby

    Wow, really good poem. I loved the rhyming sheme.