Wow, really good poem. I loved the rhyming sheme.

Its good if u need some inpiration check out "a place to put everything" or some of my others keep it up dude its good

Hun you can be saved
i miss talkin to you
gah neither of us have been writing mush lately
i miss your beautiful poetry...
but i miss you the most
how have you been

Hey i sent you an email hun
read it and reply
kaykayz