by Megann Lee Jun 7, 2006
category :
Fun, humor /
for kids
So many things I fear. |
by Robie Lincer
HaHa! i hate bugs too, and get freaked out at night sometimes, but i say to my self "close ur eyes everything woulf be okay" and well i just fall asleep! |
The words didnt flow as much as in the other poems of yours that i'v read but it was still Good. A good idea for a poem. Very creative!! A bit of rhyming and some not..you have a unique style.=D |
by Polly
Nicely written! It is very light hearted and I like the flow to it even though the lines aren't the same length. There are just a couple of spelling errors to check, but apart from that it's great! |
by Jessica
Lol! that made me laugh! great jobb.. 5/5 |
This isn't a funny poem.. -Raises eyebrow- ... But more dark... But whatever floats your boat, you put it where you want. I really liked it though.. It was very interesting. |