Comments : Things I fear.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sar

    This poem left me smiling because its very true. i like it 5/5

    sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I liked this it was really light and cute.
    Yay for the'smooshed' spider lol

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    This isn't a funny poem.. -Raises eyebrow- ... But more dark... But whatever floats your boat, you put it where you want. I really liked it though.. It was very interesting.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Lol! that made me laugh! great jobb.. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Nicely written! It is very light hearted and I like the flow to it even though the lines aren't the same length. There are just a couple of spelling errors to check, but apart from that it's great!

  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    The words didnt flow as much as in the other poems of yours that i'v read but it was still Good. A good idea for a poem. Very creative!! A bit of rhyming and some not..you have a unique style.=D

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    HaHa! i hate bugs too, and get freaked out at night sometimes, but i say to my self "close ur eyes everything woulf be okay" and well i just fall asleep!

    good poem! thanks for all the comments on my poems means alot to me 5/5

    Keep it up!