Wow that was really, really good!

Well-Done! Keep thinking clearly.

......God Is Love...war is hell.....Strive On.........

So ture 5/5

Heh thats wonderful!
Makes so much sence too.
5/5

"Innocent people will die today,
Politicians will keep it that way."

^^
How true, and sad. You brought honesty out into this poem and did a beautiful job writing it. 5/5 Christina ~

AMAZIIING!

its incredible how you get what millions of people are trying to get across in one poem! someone needs to send it to the president n knock some sense into him

This poem is really amazing. I absolutely love it ^-^

U know...i often ask myself the same thing...why are we still there....im very fond of this poem cuz it screams what im feeling so loud...my fiance is in iraq...and i dont see the point in it...

I completely agree. Did you get any offensive comments? Cause I did and now...lol, check out my ratings on my latest 10 or 12 poems.

As i agree whole heartedly with your message, i really enjoyed your poem. your rhyming was exellent, (finding a word to rhyme Iraq was very comendable). the poem was short enough to be an easy read, wich aided in convaing your message.

Ruby

Great! i really really like all that i have read of yours, i must say you will be the first to be on my favorite list!

Good Job, but I think this poem shouldnt be in saddness and depression(although it is sad) I think it fits in Life and Society a bit more.

I see you wrote in the same format as th love poem but it seems to work for this poem. Challenge yourself is all I have to say.

Juls

Wow!! Great poem!! This is one of my favorites of yours, probably cuz it is a topic I haven't read about a million times!! Great rhyming and rythmn!!
5/5

Very good job in the description department. I understand this peice clearly. I feel the same way. (along with millions more)
The rhyming was very good, but then again, it's expected from you.
In the news one soldier was quoted as saying "I feel as if we are just going in circles, waiting for someone to blow us up."
Nice work.

This was excellent, full of meaning and very true. The flow was perfect, the imagery good. Another 5/5 from me.