Comments : Too Late

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    "My winning streak is losing.
    My faith is only doubt.
    The line i walk is winding.
    My stars are burning out.

    My energy is tired.
    My sleep is wide-awake.
    My adrenaline won't start running.
    My reality is fake."

    im am freaking in love with that it was amazing brilliant keep up the good work.5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by ShaunaMarie

    I love it!! take care and keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Awesome sad poem hun. Dont know y it got low votes:( deserves a 4-5/5:)
    talk to u tomoz
    xoxoxo