Hmm, its okay. I kinda think it could use rhyming more. i like rhyme. so ya. but over all it was real nice to read. |
Ohhhhhh, I'm gonna miss you. I hope that we see eachother after graduation, but if not, I'll talk to you on line, and I could call you. But I like this poem. It's really good. |
Wow, nice poem. a bitter sweet moment. i am not looking forward to then at all. gr8 poem tho 5/5 again |