Why can't you open up

by Crystal   Jun 7, 2006


Why can't you open up to me, running scared is what you seem to be.
scared of what feelings could be there, feeling pain you could not bare.
Is it me you really want ? all I ask from you is to open up.
Don't lie to me just tell me the truth; Hug me, kiss me, touch me, is all I ask from you.
Just tell me that you care for thats all I really need to hear..
I don't ask for much but if you did theses things; it could be different between us
back to the way is used to be when it seemed you really loved me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Crystal

    Thank you for your comments I apperciate it very much theses past few years have been really hard on me ...for then recenetly someone told me to keep and journal ... I was really scard @ first bc its something I nevered did...finding in an great way for me to cope with life. knowing that people apperciate it makes me happy ...also knowing I am not alone and others out there can relate to me... and experciences thank you ...
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  • 18 years ago

    by Bonnie Rose

    Yeh i agree, it could flow more smoothly, but i think this is lovely. and i can relate, and personally, i love not keeping your writing in a set form e.t.c, let it be how it is, well done!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Meggie33

    You should try to break it down into different stanzas (paragraphs) it would give it better rythme & flow, but good job!

    **meggie**

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