Neverending Love

by Allen   Jun 7, 2006


Tears run down my face, as I write continue to this,
I realise now, that I will never feel your tender kiss
No matter what, I will love you with each passing day,
You remain in my mind, and that is where you will stay

It is difficult to put this forward, but I have no choice,
the decision is final, my heart will silence its voice
With love sometimes, the most difficult thing to do,
in the end will ultimately, help you pull through

My dear lady, I cannot make you fall in love with me,
so I decided, to hide my heart and set you free
No longer will you hear of my heart and its desire,
pursue your life of dreams and never put out your fire

In truth I still love you, my love I would burn for you
take a bullet or a fall, pain I'm willing to go through
Our days were to be kept warm, for four magical years,
however my cold days will now be spent shedding tears

You must not not feel bad, for the mistakes I made,
it wasn't you that allowed something so beautiful to fade
I must say that what we had together was beautiful,
though I couldn't make it last or keep it wonderful

Thank you my love, for all things you have given me,
now I will return the favour and just let you be
We will continue to just be the best of friends,
even though I want more, thats how I will let it end

I will continue to pray to God for you and your joy,
to find a right man, your one and only, a perfect boy
Four years you will be free, although despite the pain,
I'll be waiting for you, even if it will all be in vain...
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I Love You

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa Westfall

    Wow that was great...i loved it...i would have to say one of the best that ive read so far...keep up the awsome work

  • 17 years ago

    by Fredy

    One of the best poems i have read, just great. nothing more, nothing less just perfect.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ

    I really like ur writing...its deep and has a lot of meaning in it..i hope that i can write as good one day...ne wayz...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ---AL---

    The poem was good, but it almost seemed like a letter in my mind. The flow was a little rough and it just came off to me as a letter. The message is very clear and you get your point accross. But like I said, it seems more like a letter than a poem, but if thats what you were going for than thats great. anyway, ttyl, your friend Al

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Beautiful write. I found this loving and heartwrenching. The flow was nice and you could feel the emotion as it dripped off the page as you read.

    My favorite stanza was :
    It is difficult to put this forward, but I have no choice,
    the decision is final, my heart will silence its voice
    With love sometimes, the most difficult thing to do,
    in the end will ultimately, help you pull through

    I could totally relate. This girl just doesn't know what she has lost.
    Hopefully you will also find someone who can make you this happy again!

    My only suggestion is that some of the words (i.e. through) are used multiple times...and if you look up synonyms you may be able to find a similar word to replace where some of the words that become repetitive.
    Awesome write!!

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