Wow...there's so much emotion in it...i loved it. 5/5. stay strong...
~*~lisa~*~

Hey im the new girl here thanks 4 commenting on my poem "just a little walk" i realy like this poem of yours .keep it up

Wow.... so powerful, youve left me speechless with this poem!
amazing work, and unfortunatly so sad!

you have tallent no doubt so keep up the awsome work!

~Murder.

Another nice poem!
very sad... and ya... some ppl are like this and i hate them...

Damn........

Great really the enotion makes up for the lack of imagedry but it also makes me think which is good also so great work and keep it up 5/5

Hate is a very strong word and this is a very stong subject well done on using it so effectivily. i feel you also have a great talent for writing stories as your poems tend to vear of towards story telling rather then poems. good write though x

This is an extremely powerful poem, You can really feel the hatred while reading it. I dislike the word hate, because it is such a strong word, but loved this poem.. You turned a powerful word into something even more powerful.. Well done 5/5 xx

That was great... i was even surprised that you were able to express such anger and hatred without swearing or cursing... i really felt the emotion... excellent way to let out your feelings... keep writing and expressing!

~angel~

This poem brought tears to my eyes, and it was almost enough to make me weep. The anger and truth in this poem is so strong and I am sure it calls out to every heart; even the hardest of them all. I can relate to this poem wholeheartedly, for I myself and others I know were in similar horrific situations. Hopefully, God will give them their days. Keep up your good work! 5/5

I love your poems.
thank you for the comments on my by the way. it meant a lot.

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This was really sad and angry :(
abuse is so horrible, but it was a really well done poem

much love and many kisses,
bex