Lost Spirit

by Laura   Jun 7, 2006


You have spent almost half your life locked up behind bars
Leaving countless victims in your wake with permanent scars
Lying, cheating, stealing is the life that you choose to lead
Calculating your decisions based on nothing more than greed

Calling collect only to be comforted by hearing a familiar voice
Receiving no sympathy without understanding it was your choice
Quickly learning negative behaviors which you can easily simulate
Conditioned into a life of crime while waiting for your release date

Overbearing narcissistic tendencies enhanced by recreational drugs
New connections established, groomed with self proclaimed thugs
Hardly educated with no incentive to learn or stimulate the mind
Essentially I will never break free, as our lives will forever be entwined

Cold hearted, self centered as you lie straight to a loved one's face
Claim to be a production of society when you devalue the human race
A lost spirit detesting this life and helping to spread the hate
Ending up to be just another percentage in the recidivism rate

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, very powerful, I like it from the beginning to the end. Excellently written piece with great choice of words. The first stanza is my favorite.
    Keep up, 5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Laura....girl you kicked ass in this piece!! The words used, rhymes and the flow....PERFECT!! Each stanza kept my attention and left me wanting more. Great write!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Izi

    This is sad,but interesting to read,keep writing
    ~Izi~

  • 17 years ago

    by claire

    I totally agree with your description of some people! the last verse was so true, and the whole thing was descriptive without being too wordy!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    This poem, was good. The rhyming was great. But the flow was bad.. some lines were too long some were too short.. over all I would give you a 4 .. but i don't vote lower than 5 .. so.. just read it over at check your flow.. Great job on the idea though