I totally agree with your description of some people! the last verse was so true, and the whole thing was descriptive without being too wordy!

This is sad,but interesting to read,keep writing
~Izi~

Laura....girl you kicked ass in this piece!! The words used, rhymes and the flow....PERFECT!! Each stanza kept my attention and left me wanting more. Great write!!

Wow, very powerful, I like it from the beginning to the end. Excellently written piece with great choice of words. The first stanza is my favorite.
Keep up, 5/5 from me