Comments : I wanna be with you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dre4meR

    Lovely poem...thumbs up

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl beautifully w0rded very t0uching hun a heartfelt piece great use 0f w0rds. very well written. h0pe ur d0iin g0od xx

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awwww.. thats so sad hun, great write though! the emotion is just oozing out.. it flows well and uses good language and descriptions! i can really relate.. good job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    Great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Haha, very sweet poem. You put a lot of emotion into it, and who ever this is for, I'm sure they will love it. Yes, and even guys can appreciate romance poems from girls.