When you were mine

by StefQ   Jun 7, 2006


Another sad story
Another broken heart
Just another girl in my life
That had to part

Once more I'm lost
With the same rain cloud above
Waiting for me
To admit I lost my love

One other star disappeared
From my evening sky
One other angel left
And left me here to cry

It is what it is
I can't turn back time
But I'm happy thinking back at
The time when you were mine

What's done is done
I hope it was the best thing to do
It will just take a while
Till I get over you...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    This was a really good poem man. I know how it feels having your heart broken, but the only thing we can do is move on. I'm glad you realize that. Really good poem, nice rhymes too.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was sad. But good. A little short but it got the message across. And I liked the way you started the poem aswell. It was really well done. Keep it up! 5/5

    .x.TaLeEe.x.

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    The short snappy sentences and choice of words created the gloomy and sad mood. I can feel the emotions from the poem and I love the flow. Good write... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Its a lovely poem, I can relate very much. I understand what you are saying. {5/5} My only critisism is that the RS is so short and snappy, you should add length to the poem to add depth.

    [PygmyPuff]

  • 18 years ago

    by Myra

    I liked it. it was also from the heart. nice.

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