I liked it. it was also from the heart. nice.

Its a lovely poem, I can relate very much. I understand what you are saying. {5/5} My only critisism is that the RS is so short and snappy, you should add length to the poem to add depth.

[PygmyPuff]

The short snappy sentences and choice of words created the gloomy and sad mood. I can feel the emotions from the poem and I love the flow. Good write... 5/5

This was sad. But good. A little short but it got the message across. And I liked the way you started the poem aswell. It was really well done. Keep it up! 5/5

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This was a really good poem man. I know how it feels having your heart broken, but the only thing we can do is move on. I'm glad you realize that. Really good poem, nice rhymes too.