Amazing.. I really liked this poem.. even though somethings can leave you feeling broken.. just remember the rainbow always appears after the storm.

"It`s hatred" You used the wrong apostrophe and there shouldn't be a space between it and the 's'. (It should be "It's")

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Other then that, I love the imagery, the somewhat archaic language that you use, and the flow of the poem. It was all put together very nicely. Great poem.

:]. i loved it. really.
it. was clever.

Absolutely Awesome. The flow was wonderful and the imagery unsurpassed. You have a wonderful and an amazing talent.

Beautiful! Masterpiece indeed.

A brilliant piece that leaves one breathless. The imagery the feelings just envelop your mind. Well written

This is such an amazing poem! Your work is outstanding and simply well-written.

"The sound of thunder, roaring
across this sullen field.
A flash of lightning renders
a crushing wrath, revealed."

You have painted a scene in my mind, and your words took me on a journey. Keep writing, always and forever....