Great job in writing this one! Very deep and emotional! Keep up the good work! 5/5

-Stephanie-

Ver ydiscriptive poem i must say, altough it's pretty short bu thats no big deal coz of the discprition of the poem!
5/5

~StefQ

W0W lots of descriptive words..I like that...I've never really read anything like that on here...keep it up...

~*~Elisha~*~

Very good imagery. Your use of words created such a graphic pictures. Awesome stuff.

I gave it a 3/5 cause i didnt see the point and understand it compltely. but the last line was good and gave you a sense of something (i just cant figure that out).there was some good vocabulary in the poem.

This was a treat to read, I envy your talent :) The imagery is incredible.

How true. We can lose our sense of adventure even in fantasy.

Amazing poem! Its pieces like these that move me to the core sooo deeply. I love the way you used the olden terms of describing certain things like "faery" and "magickal" it gives such a unique strength. Great job!