Comments : Cold Blood

  • 18 years ago

    by ~**Jaimie**~

    Did i talk to you last night? i dont know if that was you or somenoe else.

    love,
    Jaimie

  • 18 years ago

    by mookoo

    I thought it was good, i always use that rhyme scheme. it would add to the flow if u attempt to keep similar lengths between couplets. but i liked the theme and it had good closure...much luv

  • 18 years ago

    by FeelingIsickIinmyhead

    Hmmm I dont think we met before Jaimie It might be someone else.

    And yeah I should fix abit of the couplets.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayd

    Twisted and erie... deffinently different, but I liked it! ;)